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faith
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« on: November 12, 2004, 07:28:23 AM »

Finally with all the help from these forums my website is up and running.  I would like invite anyone to enter a draw which I hold monthly on my site for a personalized gift - entirely free including the shipping anywhere in the world.  You can choose from a set of six personalized coasters, a cushion a pop art canvas.  All you have to do is enter the draw and if you win I will contact you for for digital photo and then put it onto whatever item you choose.  I would also appreciate any feedback with regard to how to make the site better, marketing ideas or just tips on how to get my site out there.

cheers

www.my-imaginarium.com
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« Reply #1 on: November 12, 2004, 07:54:29 PM »

A lot of your links include spaces.  For example, " Personalized Coasters and Art  As seen in Canadian Living."   It's unattractive.  It would be better to leave the blank spaces as not a part of the URL.  In some places you use dashes to separate URL from the rest of the text, some places you don't.  Be consistent one way or the other.

Don't forget to enter our contest click on the above link to win  - It would be better if it were in proper sentence structure or in some other way separate the two clauses.  The way it appears, it's just a run-on sentence.

Too much white space at the bottom.  If it doesn't serve a useful purpose, delete it.

from our selection of perfect gifts or personalize A VARIETY OF ITEMS WITH YOUR PHOTOS, ARTWORK, PRAYERS, BLESSINGS, FAVOURITE POEMS OR YOUR OWN WORDS.  IT'S EASY SIMPLY EMAIL, OR CALL US WITH YOUR ORDER.  - Different fonts, sizes, lower cased and upper cased.  Be consistent one way or another.

On your Who We Are page, the first paragraph is indented far more than the following paragraphs.  Again, it's a matter of deciding where you want the paragraphs placed, but be consistent.

I think that's the biggest problem on your website - a lack of consistency.  Sometimes you do things one way, the next time another.  Pick one way of doing something and make everything else match.  That, and grammar/punctuation/syntax errors.

It's a good concept.  Good luck!
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« Reply #2 on: November 15, 2004, 10:21:31 AM »

good points I will go in and check - how do I remove the white space at the bottom I noticed it as well but couldn't figure out how to get rid of it.  I also had a problem with the text sitting on the page properly with the nav bar on the left too close and it doesn't read well too far and I get the indent problem.
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« Reply #3 on: November 15, 2004, 06:57:38 PM »

What are you using for designing your web pages?  If you're using FrontPage, for example, I would suggest posting your questions under the FrontPage forum.   Very Happy
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