I've finally finished my personal site-

http://www.lunarpages.com/ashleigh" TARGET=_blank>
Sullen Girl V-->1.0

So, if anyone can offer some constructive critsim, or anything...be nice

[ October 26, 2001: Message edited by: calamityJ ]

who's [icture is that on the page?

   http://www.lunarpages.com/sithlegend

Ashleigh

so i finally finished reading your website

needs more pictures
 

so of your writing i didint understand

but the part where you explain what your writing is that part i like beter

kinda like watching art  and then  an expert comes and

explains it to you  and the you go  ohhh now i see

you know.. i like your memories  to bad about your father..

when ever i think about pulling fingers

something bery difrent comes to mi mind

has to do with a noise and a smell  

i also remember mi first girld friend

i messed up bad   she used to talk a lot in class

and they called her a peric u know  those green bird that go...


polly want a cracker ..  on her birthday i give her a toy fluffy  peric  and she got all mad

and i didint know why  

i cant relate to your bailarina skills but

once i tries this dance  jim carray did

the guy from the mask.. and dislocated mi knee

i guess jim carray has much more elastisity

when i whas a little kid i onced wanted to shoplift also

beacose it whas hallowin  and mi fother didint

want to buy me a mask

so i went into the bathroom of the store

and i put the mask on mi butt

i almost when tru with it but i didint

besides i walked kinda funny  and i whas
afraid i would get cought

well actually i never wanted to be a bad boy

unfortunatly nobody wanted to explaing things to me

and i did a lot of stupid things

and defenetly  1 thing i never ever ever

wanted to do again.. is

when i got in charge of watching that thing that u cook steak.. grill i think

i was watching that and 1 of the coal  those black rocks that get hot  jumped out

still looked black  beacose when they are hot they look white

so i guess it whas ok.. i mean i thought still whas not hot

wrooooooooooong

never ever  ever  eeeeveeeerrr   tried that again

so if your life is like pain all the time and you fell blue

just be happy you didint get in charge of a grill  

   http://www.lunarpages.com/sithlegend

My ribs are aching Sith....
you very funny  

I don't know if you are trying to be, but when I read your stories bout when you were little I just start LMAO for real!!

I mean this in a good way...

keep it up my friend

Wow! Beautifully done, Ashleigh. I'm very impressed! I have to say, though, that the design of the page does seem to imply that the image of your face (while lovely, to be sure) is of more weighted importance than your content - your writing, your artwork, etc. You might want to redesign a bit to put the focus on your content, if that is in fact, what you want to focus on. If not, then  you're golden!

beautifull layout
but u need to hife the scroll bars for the title
<frame set *,* scrolling=no)

really kew l pic

LOL, I'm sorry Ashleigh but I am still gigglin' from Sith's post.

Oooo I love your site, I loved reading all your stuff. It's cool.    

Perfection, sort of.  The writing is intelligent, thoughtful, and even-handed, and the design, though at first disorienting, is ideal for the subject matter.  And you used COURIER!!!! YAYYYY!!!11!!!!  The greatest typeface in the world, ever.

only thing I'd change is making the text a bit bigger.  The red on black, while ok for what you're doing, in concert with the tiny text, is a conspiracy for making me go blind.  Or would, if other things I do in my spare time aren't making me go blind already.